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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon Wed Apr 07, 2010 6:42 pm

Hi.. here is my poem .. it's simple
i hope u like it ..


**
Live in the life
so long so long
look at the night
and sing a song
don't get in fight
coz it's so wrong
**
u have to be cool
and fight is so fool
ur life is so long
just live it where u belong ..

****

THE END ..


i don't know if it have a meaning or not

but i hope u like it ..
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Post  miss naughty Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:01 pm

very wonderful job khadeeja ... Wink

Thanks for sharing Sweet heart .. I love you

Love you all ,
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Post  Panda.88 Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:07 pm

Woow This Is A Very Nice Poem

Thnx For Sharing Huni
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Post  farahkhalil Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:59 pm

Wow amazing poem Khadija Wink
I didnt know that u wrote rhyming poems O.o
Good job ...keep it up Very Happy
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Post  super saf Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:41 pm

Beautiful poem .. Very Happy
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Post  littel big brain Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:21 pm

nice one my friend..

keep it up darling !!
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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:13 pm

Thanks , i'll try to make better poems
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Post  Ms. Rehab A Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:47 pm

you're so talented Khadija Smile Smile

i loved it zillions

keep it up princess, and keep us posted
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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:32 am

Thank u teacher

Very Happy
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Post  Ms. Rehab A Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:02 am

you're welcome dear Very Happy

and i'm a fan I love you

have a great one sunny
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Post  Silver [ Zainab Jameel ] Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:40 am

live life and forget ur age poem ... life Icon_razz
thanks huni love it so much
keep it up
love [SILVER]
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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:27 pm

thank u teacher
thank u silver
thanks for posting
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Post  Ms. Rehab A Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:08 pm

it's my pleasure dear Very Happy
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Post  littel big brain Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:40 pm

i like it ..

keep it up

thankxx..
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