CoNFlicT WiTHin
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Khadooj Al-Taitoon
Ms. Rehab A
Manar A.
Nariman.A
Anood.A
Rawan Fouad Asad
Mermaid Angel
Noor Fuad
E.S
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CoNFlicT WiTHin
hi guyz
hope u doin fine
well .. i wanna share with u my poem
it's a lil bit old but i like that one
anyway hope u like it
here it's , it called ..
CONFLICT WITHIN
I'm running in the dimness
vanishing behind shadows
among tears and pain
I heard the whisper of death
I can feel you separating me from this life
I know it's not a nightmare
it's the reality
it's my damned life
My soul is lost in the forgotten spot
and these trembling thoughts
driving me to madness
I gained the pain and the suffering
I wonder why this is happening to me ?
I'm bound
by shackles of darkness
holding me tightly
A brief moment of dimness
was all I knew
before inferno's gate came into my view
It opened in creepy silence
and brought with it my last breath
I see an edge
it's the begining of a conflict within
the lies are stabbing me
straight in the heart
I'm one step closer to the edge
I want my soul back
but it seems impossible
this makes me another step closer
pain become a part of me
and we can't separate
and I'm standing at the end of the edge
I'm confused
I want to heal
I want to erase all the pain
But I'm faint
What should I do ?
run away from the reality
Or
face it all alone
??
waiting 4 ur coments
All My Greeting
Eman sari
hope u doin fine
well .. i wanna share with u my poem
it's a lil bit old but i like that one
anyway hope u like it
here it's , it called ..
CONFLICT WITHIN
I'm running in the dimness
vanishing behind shadows
among tears and pain
I heard the whisper of death
I can feel you separating me from this life
I know it's not a nightmare
it's the reality
it's my damned life
My soul is lost in the forgotten spot
and these trembling thoughts
driving me to madness
I gained the pain and the suffering
I wonder why this is happening to me ?
I'm bound
by shackles of darkness
holding me tightly
A brief moment of dimness
was all I knew
before inferno's gate came into my view
It opened in creepy silence
and brought with it my last breath
I see an edge
it's the begining of a conflict within
the lies are stabbing me
straight in the heart
I'm one step closer to the edge
I want my soul back
but it seems impossible
this makes me another step closer
pain become a part of me
and we can't separate
and I'm standing at the end of the edge
I'm confused
I want to heal
I want to erase all the pain
But I'm faint
What should I do ?
run away from the reality
Or
face it all alone
??
waiting 4 ur coments
All My Greeting
Eman sari
E.S- Posts : 3
Join date : 2007-11-29
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
thaaanx 4 your nice topic
your's
noor fuad
your's
noor fuad
Noor Fuad- Posts : 3
Join date : 2007-11-21
Age : 30
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
heeey >>>
i've read your poem and i think it's very cool and nice so thanxx for your great job
i've read your poem and i think it's very cool and nice so thanxx for your great job
amazing work
i loved it its amazing hony keep goin
Nariman.A- Posts : 28
Join date : 2007-12-21
Age : 30
Location : KINGDOM OF BAHRAIN
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
It's great ,, i like it
Tnx sis ..
Best wishes
Manar A.
Tnx sis ..
Best wishes
Manar A.
Manar A.- Posts : 2
Join date : 2009-03-18
Age : 29
Location : Bahrain
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
Good piece of reading
Ms. Rehab A- Posts : 296
Join date : 2010-03-14
Location : Bahrain
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
cool i loved it
Khadooj Al-Taitoon- Posts : 59
Join date : 2010-03-15
Age : 27
Location : Isa town , Bahrain
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
So Nice
Loved It
Keep It Up Sis
Loved It
Keep It Up Sis
Panda.88- Posts : 409
Join date : 2010-03-14
Age : 27
Location : Bahrain,,Sanad ^^ Luv My HomeTown
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
Hey there ,
omg i rly love poems man i cld actually spend a whole day jst reading them , im kinda half poet actually but my poem are pretty long so u wld jst get bored at the med and stop reading them , anyway u have a beautiful peom here woman , rly loved it , Thankss for sharing
omg i rly love poems man i cld actually spend a whole day jst reading them , im kinda half poet actually but my poem are pretty long so u wld jst get bored at the med and stop reading them , anyway u have a beautiful peom here woman , rly loved it , Thankss for sharing
super saf- Posts : 41
Join date : 2010-03-17
Age : 27
Location : bahrain
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
we would love to read some of your poems Safa,,
i will be anticipating yours cuz am sure they are really good,,
waiting
have a nice one sunshine
i will be anticipating yours cuz am sure they are really good,,
waiting
have a nice one sunshine
Ms. Rehab A- Posts : 296
Join date : 2010-03-14
Location : Bahrain
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
Safa ? Hehhe man i rly hate my name in english , i wld be rly happy if u jst call me saf , anyway well i usually write my poems for ppl , so i can write a poem for u if u want as long as ur nt gonna check my spelling then i wld be more thn happy to write some short poem jst for u
super saf- Posts : 41
Join date : 2010-03-17
Age : 27
Location : bahrain
littel big brain
So Nice
Loved It
Keep It Up Sis
Loved It
Keep It Up Sis
littel big brain- Posts : 263
Join date : 2010-03-14
Age : 27
Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin
Great Topic ...
Thanks for sharing ...
Love you all ,
Miss naughty
Thanks for sharing ...
Love you all ,
Miss naughty
miss naughty- Posts : 438
Join date : 2010-03-15
Age : 28
Location : My Dreamz .. </3
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