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CoNFlicT WiTHin

Post  E.S on Thu Nov 29, 2007 3:09 pm

hi guyz
hope u doin fine
well .. i wanna share with u my poem
it's a lil bit old but i like that one
anyway hope u like it
here it's , it called ..

CONFLICT WITHIN


I'm running in the dimness
vanishing behind shadows
among tears and pain


I heard the whisper of death
I can feel you separating me from this life


I know it's not a nightmare
it's the reality
it's my damned life


My soul is lost in the forgotten spot
and these trembling thoughts
driving me to madness


I gained the pain and the suffering
I wonder why this is happening to me ?


I'm bound
by shackles of darkness
holding me tightly


A brief moment of dimness
was all I knew
before inferno's gate came into my view


It opened in creepy silence
and brought with it my last breath


I see an edge
it's the begining of a conflict within


the lies are stabbing me
straight in the heart


I'm one step closer to the edge


I want my soul back
but it seems impossible


this makes me another step closer


pain become a part of me
and we can't separate


and I'm standing at the end of the edge


I'm confused
I want to heal
I want to erase all the pain
But I'm faint


What should I do ?
run away from the reality
Or
face it all alone
??

waiting 4 ur coments


All My Greeting
Eman sari alien

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Post  Noor Fuad on Thu Nov 29, 2007 9:01 pm

thaaanx 4 your nice topic Very Happy

your's
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Re: CoNFlicT WiTHin

Post  E.S on Fri Nov 30, 2007 8:22 am

albino
hi

thanks 4 your visit sweety albino


sis
E.S

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Nice

Post  Mermaid Angel on Tue Dec 04, 2007 9:21 am

Thx Alot Its Soo Nice I love you Very Happy Smile
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Post  Rawan Fouad Asad on Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:04 pm

heeey >>>
i've read your poem and i think it's very cool and nice so thanxx for your great job Razz
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Post  Anood.A on Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:11 pm

Thanks Rawan .. it is wonderful , thanx for such a topic have a nice time .. Very Happy
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amazing work

Post  Nariman.A on Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:42 pm

i loved it its amazing hony keep goin Smile
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Post  Manar A. on Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:08 pm

It's great ,, i like it

Tnx sis ..

Best wishes
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Post  Ms. Rehab A on Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:40 pm

Good piece of reading Cool
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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon on Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:41 pm

cool i loved it Smile
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Post  Panda.88 on Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:19 pm

So Nice
Loved It
Keep It Up Sis
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Post  super saf on Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:00 pm

Hey there ,
omg i rly love poems man i cld actually spend a whole day jst reading them , im kinda half poet actually but my poem are pretty long so u wld jst get bored at the med and stop reading them , anyway u have a beautiful peom here woman , rly loved it , Thankss for sharing
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Post  Ms. Rehab A on Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:59 am

we would love to read some of your poems Safa,,
i will be anticipating yours cuz am sure they are really good,,

waiting bounce

have a nice one sunshine
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Post  super saf on Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:12 pm

Safa ? Hehhe man i rly hate my name in english , i wld be rly happy if u jst call me saf , Razz anyway well i usually write my poems for ppl , so i can write a poem for u if u want as long as ur nt gonna check my spelling then i wld be more thn happy to write some short poem jst for u Razz
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littel big brain

Post  littel big brain on Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:29 pm

So Nice
Loved It
Keep It Up Sis
affraid
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Post  miss naughty on Fri Mar 26, 2010 11:15 am

Great Topic ... I love you

Thanks for sharing ... Wink

Love you all ,
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