Imagine
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Ms. Rehab A
Khadooj Al-Taitoon
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Imagine
Hello , here is another simple poem that I wrote .
Imagine if u were a flower
everybody can smell u
imagine if u were a food
everybody can eat u
imagine if u were a water
everybody can drink u
imagine if u were a pellow
everybody can touch u
imagine if u were a sound
everybody can hear u
imagine if u were a T.V.
everybody can see u
imagine if u are the only good person
everybody will respect u .
I know . it's bad
And i hope u like it
and i hope the words are right
Thanks ,
"waiting u to post"
Imagine if u were a flower
everybody can smell u
imagine if u were a food
everybody can eat u
imagine if u were a water
everybody can drink u
imagine if u were a pellow
everybody can touch u
imagine if u were a sound
everybody can hear u
imagine if u were a T.V.
everybody can see u
imagine if u are the only good person
everybody will respect u .
I know . it's bad
And i hope u like it
and i hope the words are right
Thanks ,
"waiting u to post"
Last edited by Khadooj Al-Taitoon on Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:25 pm; edited 1 time in total
Khadooj Al-Taitoon- Posts : 59
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Age : 27
Location : Isa town , Bahrain
Re: Imagine
i love it despite the grammatical mistakes,,,
but can you share what is behind this poem i mean what provoked you to write it what is the message you want to deliver
waiting
see you
but can you share what is behind this poem i mean what provoked you to write it what is the message you want to deliver
waiting
see you
Ms. Rehab A- Posts : 296
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Re: Imagine
uummm
it's about الحواس الخمس
is it bad?
it's about الحواس الخمس
is it bad?
Khadooj Al-Taitoon- Posts : 59
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Age : 27
Location : Isa town , Bahrain
Re: Imagine
Great Poem khadooj ..
Thanks for sharing ..
Love you all ,
Miss naughty
Thanks for sharing ..
Love you all ,
Miss naughty
miss naughty- Posts : 438
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Re: Imagine
It's really good...in fact, its an excellent poem
But this pert 'imagine if u were a T.V. everybody can see u' you shouldve said everybody can watch you ..cuz that better
Also you should the 'u' completely as in 'you' cuz its a poem not MSN language
But it's excellent keep it up khadija
But this pert 'imagine if u were a T.V. everybody can see u' you shouldve said everybody can watch you ..cuz that better
Also you should the 'u' completely as in 'you' cuz its a poem not MSN language
But it's excellent keep it up khadija
Re: Imagine
WoW it is about five senses that makes sense
i love it more now ...
amazing!! useful and i can use it in the class one day
and it is a creation of one my dear students...
thanks Taitoon
i love it more now ...
amazing!! useful and i can use it in the class one day
and it is a creation of one my dear students...
thanks Taitoon
Ms. Rehab A- Posts : 296
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Re: Imagine
MMMMMMMMM...
nice .. you can write better ..
BTW thankxx 4 the topic ...!!
nice .. you can write better ..
BTW thankxx 4 the topic ...!!
littel big brain- Posts : 263
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Re: Imagine
thanks teacher very much
and thanks little big brain
and thanks little big brain
Khadooj Al-Taitoon- Posts : 59
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Re: Imagine
Waaaw Very Nice Poem
I See A Poetryy Future
U Should Keep on Wirting Veryy Nice
I See A Poetryy Future
U Should Keep on Wirting Veryy Nice
Panda.88- Posts : 409
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Re: Imagine
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
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