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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon on Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:52 am

Hello , here is another simple poem that I wrote .

Imagine if u were a flower
everybody can smell u
imagine if u were a food
everybody can eat u
imagine if u were a water
everybody can drink u
imagine if u were a pellow
everybody can touch u
imagine if u were a sound
everybody can hear u
imagine if u were a T.V.
everybody can see u
imagine if u are the only good person
everybody will respect u .


I know . it's bad
And i hope u like it
and i hope the words are right

Thanks ,
"waiting u to post"


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Re: Imagine

Post  Ms. Rehab A on Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:00 am

i love it despite the grammatical mistakes,,,

but can you share what is behind this poem Question Question i mean what provoked you to write it Question what is the message you want to deliver Question

waiting Cool

see you
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Re: Imagine

Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon on Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:22 pm

uummm

it's about الحواس الخمس
is it bad?
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Post  miss naughty on Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:33 pm

Great Poem khadooj .. Smile

Thanks for sharing .. I love you

Love you all ,
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Re: Imagine

Post  farahkhalil on Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:43 pm

It's really good...in fact, its an excellent poem Very Happy
But this pert 'imagine if u were a T.V. everybody can see u' you shouldve said everybody can watch you ..cuz that better Razz
Also you should the 'u' completely Razz as in 'you' cuz its a poem not MSN language Suspect
But it's excellent keep it up khadija Very Happy
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Post  Ms. Rehab A on Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:11 pm

WoW it is about five senses Idea Idea that makes sense Idea

i love it more now Smile ...

amazing!! useful and i can use it in the class one day

and it is a creation of one my dear students...

thanks Taitoon
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Post  littel big brain on Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:35 pm

MMMMMMMMM...

nice .. you can write better Embarassed ..

BTW thankxx 4 the topic ...!!
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Post  Khadooj Al-Taitoon on Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:37 pm

thanks teacher very much

and thanks little big brain
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Post  Panda.88 on Sun Apr 11, 2010 7:15 pm

Waaaw Very Nice Poem

I See A Poetryy Future

U Should Keep on Wirting Veryy Nice
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Re: Imagine

Post  soso on Wed May 12, 2010 4:55 pm

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
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Post  littel big brain on Wed May 12, 2010 5:55 pm

WELCOME ..!!! Embarassed
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